The majority of the feedback was that my cover lacked any differentiation between the colour scheme. The first step I took was to move the CDI over to the right hand side a bit more, allowing me to have more room to work with for my features. I also took the strapline and made it smaller, changed the colour to a golden shade as I thought it would compliment the black background of the cover. The masthead has also been increased in size so that it draws more attention tot it when on the shelves. In the second phase I kept the majority of the text the same, however I did play around with text sizing so that certain aspects would be clearer, predominantly these were the key articles that would feature in the magazine itself, these were also highlighted with block colouring which helps enhance the overall look of the cover as well, by having more colours in the scheme it also added another dimension to the cover. The features have also been changed into colours as well so that it isn't just one single colour throughout. The third stage of this development is where I took the coverline and added it back in, again i changed the size of it and matched the colour to the strapline, I have still kept it with the strapline so as to keep a continuity aspect there. I also added the barcode and the other small bits of information, such as price, issue number and date back in, these werent changed as I felt that they were suited to where they were and weren't in need of being change.
In these next two development sections I focused on getting all the fienr details in place and ordered correctly . The first stage here I went and took out the page numbers that were with the features on the left hand side and simply had the feature, I also changed the features so that they all had the same colour, however so as not to end up with another cover that had a very single coloured scheme I then broke the featuers up using some red lines that gave it a more flashy look so to speak. In the second stage here I then moved the CDI to the right and up a bit as I felt that by moving the features covered up some of the image and I wanted to keep the entire image viewable. The main article title was then added back in and placed back into its original position so that people knew who the artist on the cover was. To make it a more authentic looking magazine cover page I have added a web page to it so that people could go online and access extra material on the magazine.
Final development of cover:
This is where the development of my cover has gone, I have used the feedback from people and through research as well, I feel that this is a much better overall look for a magazine cover. To this final one I have added back in the puffs along the bottom of the cover, and once again used the block colouring to enhance the overall aesthetics of it.
Looking back at the original cover I had, I believe that this is a much more appealing cover to my target market, it has that edgier look to it and a more current feel and look. I personally feel that overall this cover has taken into account the feedback and the criticisms that I have been given and I hope that this cover meets my target audiences needs.